cafe cinnamon

This could still use a lot of tweaking/adding but I just wanna say it's done for now. If you want to critique: Please suggest improvements that don't include "stop drawing anime". Suggestions on how to improve the anime style are awesome, but just because it isn't a realistic person doesn't mean it's poorly drawn.

The cover of my... eventual manga. Cafe Cinnamon, a sweet little maid/lolita cafe in Japan

Art (c)
Character, Cover, Story/Title (c)